Essay:Exploration is important for countries.

Topic:Exploration is important for countries.


Essay Plan

Introduction:

Nowadays there is a growing awareness that exploration is important for countries or societies. People were asked by the countries to explore in some dangerous places such as the high mountains , dense forests, and even he moon. Actually, exploration has been an important part for countries since ancient times. Depending on exploration, people can discover lots of abundant resources that they haven’t noticed before, countries can set up more relations with other countries for their people and its a good way for the countries to develop faster.

Thesis Statement:

Depend on exploration, people can discover lots of abundant resources that they haven’t noticed before, countries can set up more relations with other countries for their people and its a good way for the countries to develop faster.

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Topic Sentence: Lots of valuable resources can be found by explorations.

Body: Formerly, everywhere in the world haven't advanced totally. There are no cars, planes or trains. The Vikings could only explore by Viking ships and spent all the times drift about in the sea. Though exploration is not an easy commission, it can't cease the people whose heart is filled with curiosity about the world. Columbus is one of the crazy people who discovered the New World for Spain. When he reached Saudi Arabia he discovered various kinds of spice trades. All of them have miraculous tastes and attracted Columbus a lot. He communicated with Arabs for the spice and he was allowed to entry into spice trades for his country-----Spain! Depending on this business,Spanish people can enjoy different food with spice trade that they haven't tasted before. In addition .Cod is a wonderful food that has been found during exploration by John Cabot.This kind of fish wasn't been awarded by people before,they lived in the ocean near Newfoundland.John Cabot found that kind of fish at the same time as he reached North America .People in England can eat the fish after the exploration.

Concluding Sentence: In summary, without explorations people can't understand how mystical the world is and can't enjoy abundant resources exceed their short side.

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Topic Sentence:Countries can establish more relations with other countries or their people by explorations.



Body: Columbus didn't have enough money on his exploration. Fortunately, he reached Spain and met their queen. On his way, he persuaded the Queen to aid financially and adopts friendship with his country ---Portugal. As the old saying goes,” more friends more chances.” Columbus helped his country an establish relation with other countries. Moreover, Jacques Cartier sailed to Canada’s land Nicolette with some business man for learning their language of Native. This behave let is country set up a relation with Native people and they went on exchanging of commodities. After that, western people could wear fur clothes which from the fox, beaver and wolf.Also, the business man were happy with the interests they got from the fur trade.

Concluding Sentence: Thus, set up more relations with others can benefit not only their countries but also their people.

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Topic Sentence: Exploration is a strong way for countries to develop faster.

Body:In the past,development is the most important business for a country.Do you know the map "Gulf of Saint Lawrence" This famous map was written by Jacques Cartier who sailed over the Gulf of St.Lawrence and went to Quebec and Montreal.The map reveals the details about the way along the Gulf of Saint Lawrence.This map helped French people to understand Canadian topography a lot.They could travel around Canada easily for business or probe resources.Besides this reason, after made sure the geography, climate and people on the new lands that have been found during explorations.The sailors always came back to their own countries and reported the findings of Vikings.Those fantastic lands and suitable environment are deeply touched by their king.The country would like to extend their land and those new lands were became to the countries' colony.More lands brought more national economy.Then, the countries will develop speedily.

Concluding Sentence: Therefore, country may develop faster because of the explorations.

Conclusion: All in all, given more explorations ,countries may discover much more abundant resources that they haven’t noticed before, set up more relations with other countries for their people and its a best way for the countries to develop faster.There is nothing to match explorations for its dangerous,difficult but brilliant achievement.